This is my monster.
My monster’s name is Squiddy Eyeballs.
He is friendly but gets too much enthusiastic and excited with things he sees with interest. When new guests come over to his place welcomes them with big squeeze of his tentacles. He likes to eat insects and whatsoever he finds on the ground and likes to drink slime or mud that can make him fill up his energy.
My monster was found in a flying saucer that crashed. I have adopted it and came home with us. I do not know how old he was but I have raised him since he was little.
When he is hungry he wants to suck the flesh of pigs and cows till he has his food. He has green skin and one huge mouth with teeth and the rest around him is little and big eyeballs that could be plenty to see around him. He has 3 siblings their names are Slime, Squish and Bubble eyes. Squiddy makes a weird sound that sounds like a yucky slime sound. Last of all he moves like a spider.
When he is hungry he wants to suck the flesh of pigs and cows till he has his food. He has green skin and one huge mouth with teeth and the rest around him is little and big eyeballs that could be plenty to see around him. He has 3 siblings their names are Slime, Squish and Bubble eyes. Squiddy makes a weird sound that sounds like a yucky slime sound. Last of all he moves like a spider.
by his human adoption custodian Amanda.
Fantastic monster you have created... love the custodian part. Keep writing Amanda I can see great improvement in the style and how to capture your readers. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool! I love how you described your monster specifically. The name of your monster really matches the photo. Great choice! The ending part was brilliant! I really enjoyed it. I like how you try to use different sentence starters and it really shows how much effort you are putting into your writing. Well done! I would recommend you to make sure you proof-read and check if their is any mistakes. But other than that, I think this is awesome work! Keep it up!
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