Alien invasion
during the night in mudpuddle farm something was coming through the front gate it was dressed in white. It wore white gloves and a white helmet and it was carrying out puffed out smoke from its weird gun and on the other hand it was swinging around socks in a sack. A sheep named diana cried that she saw a martian then all the animals started running for their lives then they founded out that it was farmer Rafferty that was actually dressed up in a bee keeping costume.
By Amanda
I recommend this book for 8 to 10 because it’s all about a martian that is creeping up on the farm and all the animals are afraid.
Author: Michael morpurgo
Hi Amanda
ReplyDeleteThis is great but remember that you always have to put a capital letter in every new sentence. Besides that this is great.
From: Anonymous
Well thankyou I will now always prof read my work over an over
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