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Thursday, 28 May 2015

Book review

Alien invasion

during the night in mudpuddle farm something was coming through the front gate it was dressed in white. It wore white gloves and a white helmet and it was carrying out puffed out smoke from its weird gun and on the other hand it was swinging around socks in a sack. A sheep named diana cried that she saw a martian then all the animals started running for their lives then they founded out that it was farmer Rafferty that was actually dressed up in a bee keeping costume.  

By Amanda

I recommend this book for 8 to 10 because it’s all about a martian that is creeping up on the farm and all the animals are afraid.
Author: Michael morpurgoImage result for alien invasion michael morpurgo

3 comments:

  1. Hi Amanda
    This is great but remember that you always have to put a capital letter in every new sentence. Besides that this is great.

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  2. Well thankyou I will now always prof read my work over an over

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